I find this photo to be quite beautiful. I love the background the most, the soft colors and soft bokeh. I also love how her hair is a similar color to the background but her hat and shirt give it some contrast. I think her expression could have been slightly different, maybe with her mouth closed and a more powerful stare. I love the simplicity of this photo, the lighting is great. The way the background, her hair and her eyes all coordinate yet contrast against her hat and shirt. Its also a very high quality image. Great job overall!
I love the mood of this shot. The model is beautiful and I like that you've chosen a background with minimal contrast . It draws your attention to the model, while also making the background seem necessary for the tone that you wished to achieve.
I like the way you're in the middle of the shot, I like the black outfit you've chosen (it really makes the portrait more simple) and I love the background (How'd you do that? Is it fog or something? ). The only thing that bothers me is that your right eye is slightly covered by your fringe and that gives the illusion of blurriness (or something strange like that) at first glance. But overall a very pretty high-quality portrait. I very much appreciate the style as well, as I couldn't even tell that it's a self-portrait.